Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undeniable that studying abroad is a huge chance for every students to have a gorgeous future. Although i agree that there might be somes social problems as well as pratical difficulties I still believe that there are more benefits involved.
First of all, studying in foreign lands means that students have to live far away from their family, friends, and their hometown. Cannot get used to the region’s lifestyle or culture is a severe problem . Therefore, students find it difficult to expand their social network. Having no friends, their study become more stressful and challenging. Moreover, living far away they have to take care of themselves, which most of them are not used to. They have to handle many tasks includig cooking, washing, cleaning, which is challenging for them. For example, being unable to wash or clean, some of the undergraduate ignore the tasks. Their places and clothes are more dirty and get lots of viruses, even so bacterias. Being unable to cook they have to eat instant noodle or street food which are absolutely awful for their health and study . Consequently they might get into some terrible health problems and have to abadon their dream.
Overcoming the above mentioned drawbacks, I believe that studying away has more assets. Firstly, students will be able to approach a better techniques, better social, and the lastest knowledges. Besides, this is a life chance for a pupil to discover and experience brand-new life, different world that not anyone can achive. Furthermore they will have chances to work and stay in the country that they are studying. Therefore the salary will be higher, their living standards will be increased.
Despite the drawbacks of studying abroad its good points are more significant from my view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, even so, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09931506849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61709442143 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0428721694 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939362808751 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304493616859 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256239170777 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530862007551 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310111874671 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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