Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this age of globalization, fast communication and easy travelling, it has become very convenient to explore the world. However,everything is not as perfect as it sounds. Some people argue that living in a foreign country, where you can not speak their language fluently, may cause grave personal or social difficulties. They claim it makes it very hard to live abroad. While I partially agree with this statement, it shouldn't deter us from settling abroad.
Learning a new language as an adult is not a joke. It requires a lot of dedication and hard work. It may completely change your way of thinking, along with you personality sometimes. And if you don't adapt to these reforms quick enough, it surely will cause some inconveniences. For example, Japanese find it rude to call elderly people by their names, rather they use titles like 'Oji-wan'. Imagine the immense embarrassment for an expatriate if he were to make such a mistake. Hence, it can be embarrassing to be aware of only the language and not the culture.
Now, as far as living in a foreign land is concerned, if the visitor's demeanor and personality are respectable and modest, then language barrier shouldn't be a significant hurdle. Love and respect are the same in all languages and culture throughout the world. Take the example of Sir Jeffery Langland's, who was a British teacher that settled in the foothills of Himalayas. Although he did not know the native language, he managed to convince the locals to let him teach their children the modern subjects. Therefore, respect and humility are more important tools to survive in a foreign place than just the language.
In conclusion, granted that language barriers can cause problems but those can be overcome by a good heart and a great nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , everything
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Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
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Suggestion: shouldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92976588629 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92091407244 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.569962359 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8888888889 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213126003381 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536523015782 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650364567865 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123566105249 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685492924098 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.