Have you ever suffered from confusion when you were traveling in a foreign country, and you couldn't clearly understand others? It is a common experience, not to mention living in a foreign nation. Therefore, someone raised the idea that language barrier could cause both social and practical problems and I am agree with this view.
No matter how excellent your language skill are, you will come across a culture shock when you first come in a foreign country, and sometimes, it even contributes to serious social issues. Since language is a microcosm of national culture, different word has its own meaning in different cultural background. For instance, the word “china” could be a container in English, however it also has a insulting meaning in China. It isn't hard to find that using those with multi-layer and religious meaning incorrectly would lead to misunderstanding and even social conflicts.
On the other hand, when you have a poor English, language barrier would be an obstacle in your daily life. Undoubtedly, everyone has to communicate with others wherever you live. When you are shopping, working or just playing computer games, you may buy a wrong commodity or stray, because you can't read and express yourself. What's more, it will also negatively influence your interpersonal ability. When you are attending a social event, you could only sit in a sofa, while others are chatting with laugh, which makes you feel lonely and isolated.
In conclusion, our personalities are shaped by our native culture, so obviously we have to face numerous inevitable problems when we live a place, using a foreign language. Only understanding deeply and improving language skill could tackle this issue, which we can not deny.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...traveling in a foreign country, and you couldnt clearly understand others? It is a comm...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... social and practical problems and I am agree with this view. No matter how excell...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ntainer in English, however it also has a insulting meaning in China. It isnt har...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...so has a insulting meaning in China. It isnt hard to find that using those with mult...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...a wrong commodity or stray, because you cant read and express yourself. Whats more, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...use you cant read and express yourself. Whats more, it will also negatively influence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, even so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18021201413 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87158950683 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.157734946 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321975311199 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105936503905 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644281962158 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193020632564 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878077621326 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.