Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
It is often argued that lives in a strange place where people have to communicate in a new language, which can lead to serious social issues and practical problems. I completely concur with this opinions.
First of all, living in another country that makes people meeting some bad people; as a result, they involve some criminal activities. Due to the fact that those people such as pupils do not focus on learning; consequently, they cannot graduate and get a job. Moreover, governments do not accept people who against the laws and engage in social problems. Compared with the past, there were not many various criminal reports by foreigners, the public places were safer. If these issues continue, authorities will create a new rule to limit the foreigners who want to work and study.
Regarding practical problems, people always face the language barrier that they have to communicate and interact with residents in order to get their targets. In fact, international students sometimes have troubles in studying, research as well as teamwork because of the new language. Furthermore, the importance of foreign language affect foreigners who want to succeed in their career. For instance, companies and employers prefer to recruit the native rather than a foreigner. If this problem is not solved, the percentage of unemployment of international students will be rose significantly in the future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that speaking in a foreign language can cause serious social problems and practical problems. Therefore, governments need to pay more attention to this issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31496062992 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88069550574 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2433350177 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344872922177 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989339142369 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144555189681 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221986853249 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112411069632 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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