living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? give reasons for your answer and include any examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been stated that people live in abroad and must communicate in that country’s language other than their mother tongue could face not only serious social problems but also practical ones. In my opinion, before mentioned problems affect foreigners.
Living in a foreign country could cause serious problems. The most important one is xenophobia that local people tend to see foreigners as enemies. For instance, during the Second World War, there was a common hate to Jewish even though they speak in german and live with them that led to a massacre of Jewish people by Germans. The second issue that the governments are inclined to treat migrants as minority which would cause inequalities even if they work and live in same conditions with their citizens. That could ease the way for local people to treat foreigners in an insulting way.
Another aspect that could lead is practical issues. First and foremost, foreigners could have some difficulties in with fully understanding the local language such as they would not be familiar with the idiomatic expressions. Due to the fact that most of the foreign people live a hard time to adapt a counrtry’s language which construct the base layer of that country’s culture. In addition to that, they could find it hard to express themselves in fully as they do with their mother tongue in a way that they could feel themselves shy to communicate with local people in daily life basis.
In conclusion, living in a foreign country could cause both important social and practical problems that should be handled with properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an insulting way" with adverb for "insulting"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ay for local people to treat foreigners in an insulting way. Another aspect that could lead is pr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70936884209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.363364228 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185548990585 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832947956816 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750543814839 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126410328362 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308145796888 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.