Nowadays, one of the controversial issues is related to working or studying in a foreign nation where people do not know their native language. Although some people tend to believe that in overseas they can communicate with each other so easily, the rest of them, included me, agree that living in abroad brings some psychological problems and difficulties associated with interacting social activities we every time do. In this essay, I will support both sides with examples and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that people who live so far from their own country such as refugees international students experience a serious isolation sense. the primary reason for believing this is that in most cases, cause of lack of knowledge of a language, they miss parents and country for a long time and really want to talk someone by using a native language. It is also possible to argue that between these hard periods, the majority of them acquire pressures of psychology which is the cause of disease. The particularly good example is that research in 2007 shows that emigrated people had already faced negative senses.
The second reason why I agree is that people living in another country cannot participate in the activities of the public. Furthermore, people who have not studied the language used in their living country cannot do anything related to regular actions everybody does. One of the important illustrations is that finding a job in abroad is really hard for people who moved from another nation and have a problem with language.
On the other hand, some people think that negative aspect of living in a place so far from their home is fastly solved if they have a few efforts. People often have this opinion because as for their case, methods possible to use such as body language, translator and smartphone can help them to communicate with each other.
In conclusion, as we have seen, this question is uneasy to discuss. However, it is evident that going to overseas without knowledge of the language is reasons of tangible problems related to feelings and face-to-face communication to peoples but these issues are possible to be solved by using some way such as body language and smart devices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95526315789 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67412320267 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0550158578 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164310257869 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622582512716 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323692912176 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993295842281 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343652050744 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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