As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? How problems might be solved?
Nowadays, it is true that major cities are developing and this may cause some potential problems. Young people have to face with several main problems which cause by the consequence of cities growth and these troubles could be tackled by the authorities.
As young people suffer from the result of cities development, several related problems can be foreseen. In fact, cities’ high housing rent costs are pricing out young residents and students who get depends mainly on their parent’s subsidy. Besides, cities growth affects mental health through the influence of increase stressors and factors such as overcrowded, polluted environment and high levels of violence. For example, young people experience environmental and psychological adversity that increases their vulnerability to mental disorders.
There are several actions that the authorities could take to solve the problems described above. In fact, the provincial and municipal authorities hold primary responsibility for tackling the consequences of high housing costs and they need to work together with housing associations to help young people. For example, they should provide more flexibility for young residents who want to rent a house and allow them renting with a fraction of the deposit which the landlords would normally require. Also, the urban authorities should tighten security to prevent violence and raise awareness of environmental protection. This may lead to declining the negative impacts on young people mental health.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various problems with the detrimental effects which growing cities have on young people and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59689922481 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88112536353 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4186425634 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325996405628 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120006940743 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794160067271 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216266004332 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603473437473 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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