Many animal species are now in danger of becoming extinct. Indirectly or directly, numerous factors contribute to the extinction of some animal species; nonetheless, human activities on land and at sea constitute the most evident and significant threat to faunal variety. This essay will explain why human actions on land and in the sea have brought many species to the verge of extinction, as well as suggest viable solutions to remedy the situation.
First, one of the terrestrial activities of people that drives particular animal kinds to the edge of extinction is unlawful hunting or poaching. This is seen in the booming black market trade in unlawfully obtained animal goods like rhino horns. The rhino was viciously attacked for its horn when people heard rumors that it had miracle properties. As a consequence, it led to a dramatic decline in the world's rhino population. To demonstrate this point, the World Animal Protection Organization (WAPO) has issued a warning that rhino species will become extinct within the next three decades if poaching does not decrease and governments around the world, including Vietnam, do not implement stronger and more radical measures to reduce demand for rhinos. Second, human actions not only harm terrestrial creatures but also contribute to the extinction of aquatic creatures, notably the release of waste into the marine environment. This action leads to pollution in the water and destroys marine ecosystems, rendering some marine species never reemerging. To exemplify this point, millions of sea animals perished due to the Fomusa factory's direct dumping of untreated waste into the sea in the central area of Vietnam in 2016, resulting in significant contamination of the marine ecosystem. Although six years have passed since the tragedy, its aftereffects remain unresolved. The government of Vietnam claims that numerous marine species remain polluted with poisons, causing the brink of extinction of two fish species after this occurrence.
With the aforementioned two contributing factors, it is critical that we find a way to stop the extinction of some animal species as soon as possible. The first step is for the government to pass animal protection laws, then tightly regulate and enforce it to cut down on unlawful hunting and the dumping of trash into marine life's natural environment. The severity of the punishments should be increased so that individuals think twice before being cruel toward animals. Next, people need to take animal conservation seriously as well as spread knowledge of the issues surrounding endangered species and the laws that have been created to preserve them. Protecting animals would include things like avoiding buying items that involve the unlawful hunting of animals or refraining from damaging their natural environment. Finally, it is the obligation of both schools and families to instill in their children respect for animals from a young age so that they develop compassionate attitudes and actions toward animals as adults.
In summary, numerous species of animals have been brought to the verge of extinction during the last several decades due to human activity on land and at sea. Protecting and preventing damage to animals is a shared responsibility of governments and their citizens if we want to preserve animal variety and boost populations of threatened species. The aforementioned measures would help stop the extinction of animal species and ensure that biodiversity is protected for future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, still, then, well, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2976.0 1615.20841683 184% => OK
No of words: 553.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38155515371 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87515666321 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 176.041082164 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529837251356 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 933.3 506.74238477 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4343419065 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1363636364 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364158531657 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10405279808 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893361265073 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251911418378 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101355247372 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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