Now-a-days, the lifestyle of people has been changed in different aspects. For many people, especially who are living in cities are likely to live in tower block apartments. However, there are both pro's and con's to deciding to do this. In this essay , I will discuss some of the reasons why living in multi-story apartment blocks are so popular and some of the challenges o be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of living in rise apartment blocks. One of the main positives of living is that cost is cheap. What i mean by this is that the rent is cheaply available compared to individual houses and cope with different types of people in our surroundings. This can make you the most happiest person in the world.
Secondly, if there are environmental lovers then it was the best place to live.For instance, recently my friend shifted from a individual house to large apartment block , as she is the nature-lover enjoying the view by sitting in the balcony of her flat. so, for this kind of persons large apartment blocks are perfectly suitable.
Turning to the otherside of the argument, there was less space is a major problem. Many people who are living in this kind of accommodation should have a adjust to everything. This often leads to private space will be completely concealment. This often leads to distress in their personal lifes.
Another issue is that if anything happens to the person like medical issues who are living in the tower block the person health is kept at risk because it should be time consuming process from taking that person to down stairs. For example, last year my uncle was died due to some health problems while he was taking from his flat he died in the middle because bring to ground floor was delayed.
All things considered, starting life in rise apartment block is never easy. You need to weigh up the pro's of the better lifestyle,cost and so on and the con's of health problems and barrier of space. Personally, I believe the negatives in terms of personal desires eventually outweigh any benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78991596639 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165309878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4641430111 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199969527242 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644541079569 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598187056679 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102995313824 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549696516183 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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