In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks.
Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People make choices about the kind of accommodation they prefer to live in considering their budget, specific requirements and suitability. In the contemporary era, most people prefer large apartment complexes over isolated houses due to various reasons. A few others would go for a house rather than an apartment because of the increased privacy and more independence. However, I personally believe that advantages of living in an apartment visibly outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, one of the greatest benefits an apartment has to offer is convenience such as sports facilities, laundry facilities, pools and security around the clock. All these amenities are available at very reasonable and economical packages to the residents of these building blocks. Apart from the amenities and security aspects, the diversity of cultures is one of the joys apartment blocks are offering to their residents. Undoubtedly, living in a residential block has a great social aspect, the feeling of being a part of the community which might enable people to develop life-long connections. The crime statistics from 2016 revealed the fact that those who had been living in building complexes are much safer than those who opt for isolated accommodations or houses.
On the opposite side, there are some visible downsides of living in an apartment. First and foremost, due to crowded nature of apartment buildings, the privacy offered by apartment complexes is less than of living in isolated accommodations. Furthermore, most of the apartments have premium parking, pet restrictions and no availability of gardening opportunities.
Last but not the least, the serious concern of affordable housing in cities is unavoidable, thus by having larger apartment blocks, there are increased opportunities for everyone to get an accommodation in cities at affordable prices. Therefore, huge apartment complexes are economical, safe, convenient and more practical than houses
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'joys'' or 'joy's'?
Suggestion: joys'; joy's
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...eased opportunities for everyone to get an accommodation in cities at affordable prices. Therefo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17003154558 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4028724478 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222641627441 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732873725104 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292854778241 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136671180758 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349050513491 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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