Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s era, sports have become a common domain where many businesses and companies like to invest in terms of sponsorship, because sports prove to be a major medium for marketing products, which in turn indirectly raises the sales and branding of companies. Here, I will try to illustrate both views of this statement.
To begin with, cut throat competition has made companies to find various platforms for endorsing product, as a result proliferation by sports can be fruitful for companies on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, people of every age group like to watch various sports, as it provides them amusement and way to mitigate stress, consequently company can conveniently promote their products because of huge outreach. On the top of that, sponsoring any sport may raise the credibility and recognition of any company, which are deemed prominent factors for any company’s success. For instance, it has been seen in many surveys that companies which sponsor sports, get better response and growth in business.
On the flip side, it is an unambiguous that marketing plays a crucial role in company’s prosperity, but spending hefty amount on sponsoring sports can result drastic outcomes. Firstly, people who have mediocre life, they do not even get a time to watch sports on account of burden of responsibilities, which delineates that such marketing by companies can lure only affluent people, rather than ordinary people. Thus, it is better to spend such amount of money for the development of society as well as for public welfare, which can surely prove milestone for the companies. In addition, proliferation of company’s product in mid of the sports can dampen the spirit and enthusiasm of the spectators.
In conclusion, I reckon that company’s should spend money for the development of society and for the people who are deprived of basic amenities, rather than on sports events, as it may create a deepen impact for the business of any company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, as for, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95045487887 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3709448376 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3636363636 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11853970744 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575614471845 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237041440158 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836030764791 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224454955297 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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