Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
-comics
-books
-radio
-television
-film
-theatre
Media plays a vital role in disseminating information and enables people to remain informed of the happenings in the world as a result they become more aware and knowledgeable. However, there are various forms of media such as books, radio, television and so on, and each one of them exhibits certain advantages and disadvantages, which I am going to illustrate.
To begin with, television, films and books are the most viable sources of media which in turn make people to live up to date and be familiar with the current affairs. Thus, these media sources furnish manifold fruitful outcomes in people's life. Firstly, television is not only a source of entertainment, but also a pathway of acquiring knowledge about several things such as communication skills, personality skills and so on, which are deemed very essential for someone to be successful. Furthermore, television gives a pragmatic view to the people, thereby they can easily relate their theoretical knowledge and later consolidate it by watching it on television. Secondly, films typically represent the picture of society wherein people can know about the importance of any relation, value, social norm and many more, consequently it constitutes the greatest source of entertainment for the people of every age group, which is again a noteworthy. Thirdly, books make someone more sharp and intelligent, hence good reader can only become a good negotiator and communicator.
On the other hand, these media sources also have certain negative aspects. Firstly, television has become a major cause of distraction among youth, and they blindly try to imitate the things which transpire on television, which is utterly erroneous. In addition, films have now become a centre of violence and hatred, thereby not imperative for the holistic development of people and especially for the young minds. Indeed, books can carry a little problem for those people who face an eye sight problem owing to which sometimes such people find ramification in reading books. In addition, the language of book can be understand by only those people who are knowledgeable, which again amounts to another problem for the laymen.
In conclusion, I opine that media's role is to spread information and therefore it is up to people to take the best out of it,for their betterment. Here, television outstrip other modes of media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20364741641 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86652408006 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589665653495 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1215181011 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200643313411 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663297853009 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388715312017 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116426888041 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180233436117 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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