In many countries around the world, it is common for families to run their own business. SOme people think that keeping the business within the family is the best approach while others believe this could lead to problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, the idea of family-owned business has become more and more common. Many argue that running family businesses may bring several benefits, I still believe that it can lead to conflict between family members and raise the negative outcomes.
On the one hand, various reasons explain why running family businesses can bring advantages, such as profits and loyalty. First and foremost, commitment and unified leadership are one of the most vital reasons contributing to the success of family businesses. All family members demonstrate and share a level of commitment to the firms since the core of any business is a shared business vision and identity. It can open further opportunities to work for a long time and be stable in the business system. Furthermore, the family-owned trade helps reduce the expenditure of hiring or training qualified employees when all family members have the same background and help each other to develop their skills.
It seems to me that some challenges will come in the way of family businesses which outweighs the benefits. The first reason is that family members can easily conflict about the financial aspects such as paying inequality income or sharing the perk so that the family's bond is on the verge of being untrustworthy, and losing control. In addition, family businesses rely on trust but trust alone may not be the best way. It is still vital to take rules seriously both the internal rule and external corporate law. For instance, many members take advantage of being acquaintances that violate the general rules for personal gain so the truth disappears.
In conclusion, family businesses, as similar to any other profession, have both positive and negative aspects and depending on the situation, can be profitable or harmful. Generally, in my perspective, while it should be decided by considering various aspects, the advantages of family-run trade outweigh its disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23794212219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87577394539 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.599463444 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299823445576 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106318707642 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516749880062 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192328134405 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616580046144 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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