In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it is a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For-instance, the given topic asserts that; "paid work" whether it is good for children to engaged with it, to get experience and to make them responsible or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and example and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people; who believe that it is absolutely wrong to engaged the pupils to do paid-work. They strengthen their view point by claiming that; teenagers requires maximum time to study. A good illustration of this is nodoubt, adolescence is the age of education and "Education is the weapon that changes the world." Therefore, if, they give more emphasis to study, as a result; achieve success to get high profile job in future but, it is only possible if young-generation spend much time to clear compitative exams; AIIMS, IIT would be the best epitome of this.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people, who reckon that it is highly benefical for pupils to engaged in paid-work so, they are able to get working-experience, and learned to became responsible citizens. To make their view point convincing they claim that; when, children earn their livelihood they also come to know what is the importance of money in human life? Beside it, young-ones learnt about responsibilities of life when they provides assistance to their parents in their house hold practises.
To make it crown, weighing both options; I pen down saying that there is no single conclusion, still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, paid- work by the students helps them to learn plethora of good things; to get work experience as well as cultivate their minds to become a good citizens but, it is also important that adolescence is the age of getting education which we are not suppose to be neglected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...bout responsibilities of life when they provides assistance to their parents in their ho...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
... cultivate their minds to become a good citizens but, it is also important that adolesce...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...e of getting education which we are not suppose to be neglected.
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...e of getting education which we are not suppose to be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97765363128 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99804873967 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4764578821 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203964467492 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682234492232 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656399656728 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121661290395 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273718126422 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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