In the recent years, crime has become an important issue for many countries, as it is becoming more violent and increasing day by day. This is mainly because of lack of education and fewer job opportunities for the youth, which are correlated. This essay will discuss two main causes and suggest two solutions to curb the crime rate in any country.
The problem arises when people are uneducated, and they are unable to find work to earn a livelihood. Individuals indulge in criminal activities for fulfilling their basic needs such as food, clothing, and shelter. For instance, the rate of unlawful activities is the highest in the African continent, and it has also been observed that the literacy rate in that region is the lowest where the crime rate is the highest in the world. Because of lack of education, people are unable to find a job and make a decent living eventually resorting to crime industry.
However, there are two main strategies which the government can implement to control the crime rate. Firstly, increasing the level of education and giving vocational training, so that the men/women develop skills required for availing a job. Secondly creating more and more jobs. To exemplify, the Chinese have developed the manufacturing industries by creating an infrastructure for the entire world to invest and manufacture in china, resulting in creation of new work streams. This pulls the youth towards earning a livelihood legally.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that lack of education and fewer job opportunities are the two main reasons for the increase in crime rate, and suggested that increase in the level of education and generating additional jobs will enable the government to maintain law and order in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09252669039 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88170542161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9268687307 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195201869077 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729607884347 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683129453091 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129157302969 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569214875431 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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