In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
Food products from foreign countries have gained greater popularity among consumers than domestic ones. There are several underlying reasons for such a preference; and some initiatives could be taken to promote consumers’ demand for local food.
An increasing number of people tend to purchasing food imports owing to their propensity for commodities’ foreign origin as well as their concern for quality of local food. First, in many countries such as Vietnam, consumers show significant interest in imported goods as they hold the belief that anything with a foreign tag is better. Second, consumers are growing impatient with the deterioration in food hygiene and safety. In fact, spoiled ingredients are still used and distributed illegally in the market without any strict supervision, which creates a common sense of distrust and prejudice against locally produced food.
The government could play an essential part in boosting the consumption of domestic commodities through some practical measures. To begin with, propagation campaigns about the need for public endorsement for indigenous food on the media are imperative. This would help consumers have an unbiased view on products made by local companies. Also of tremendous importance is law enforcement against the abuse of inedible ingredients such as spoiled meat or vegetables. Undoubtedly, if the production of local food is carried out under the state’s stricter regulations, purchasing power for domestically produced food will be considerably enhanced.
In conclusion, the causes for consumers’ change of preference for food are varied; and the government could do a lot in the endeavor to motivate them to buy local products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ew on products made by local companies. Also of tremendous importance is law enforce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65637065637 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16082066198 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633204633205 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0390184655 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281018235379 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984288188197 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611156418636 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17463367301 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033670865785 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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