In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 307.0 1615.20841683 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 59.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20338983051 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.77148800248 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81733461231 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 176.041082164 28% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.830508474576 0.561755894193 148% => OK
syllable_count: 89.1 506.74238477 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 27.748873851 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.75 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799204562876 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489504732625 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519203178198 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656122710767 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457031265957 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.