In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this sitation is.
At the outset of you Millennium, it has become trend among people to commute other nations in their old age. It is stated that after getting retirement in several nations, folkes pretend their movement not only in different part of world but also in their own country, I believe that some reasons behind this traveling and also few result of this movement which will be explained in upcomimg paragraphs before reaching to any conclusion.
The fact cannot be denied that, in most of the cases in their old age individuals tend to move distinct nations owing to some reasons. The pivotal one is that, better facilities attract older ones which is easily available in foreign countries. However, sometimes these opportunties are hard to get at their host nation . For instance, higher pension scheme, free medical and plethora of others, these facilities can be found in any europe country. Hence, better facilities are the root cause behind commuteness.
On the flip side, movement of retired persons create some outcomes. The prominent one is that, population is being increased in foreign nations due to movement of individuals from one place to another place which lead some harmful diseases. For example, pollution, breathing problems are being inclined America, Australia etcetera because of our population. Thus, increment in deadly ailments can be seen after traveling.
To sum up after throwing light on above discussion, i personally feel that, attraction of appropriate facilities are the major reason behind this movement which create overcrowded a related issue in overseas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69350041951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644268774704 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3448854537 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136794447586 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447485253311 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513897049712 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804612384623 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603688666802 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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