In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
In numerous states, the part of elderly people is continuous raised. Some older humans are enjoying the longer life and some countries in it possible, because all health facilities are available. I believe that, this has both the positive and negative effects on society.
On the one hand, the increase in the number of elderly people is a good thing, because those people have experience and that humans are helpful for improving knowledge on work places. The facts they provide can be very helpful to business, because those people have gone through this time. The young generation of take leisure at home, because older people they can give all the information about the history of the old time tradition.
One the other hand, as lifes are increase so,more money is needed to pay for pension as well as improve the social programs. Which accounts for a large proportion for public services. As the days go by, older humans become a burden on family because those people are lot of spend money and they may be in a lot of trouble financially and old people are depend foreign immigration.
To sum up, the old age affects the development of society in many ways. There experience can be importance for society. As the lives of older people grow so, does the pressure on young generation and companies have less productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8201754386 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49148673602 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6342149071 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257032944738 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859763529985 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578202805016 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148050585285 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377700747081 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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