In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good while others believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
"Elders are like gold, which shines more by the heat of experience". The number of grown up people are increasing gradually; add a boon or bane for a country? This is the most contentious issue these days. I will examine both the sides of this topic and give my opinion by the end.
There are number of people who consider elders a problem for country. The main reason behind this believe is pensions paid to retired people leads to decline in economic status of country. Moreover, their physical status and outdated ideas cannot help country in any kind of development. For instance, recent survey conducted by "Harvard University" in America, states that every rise in the number of older people, decreases the economic status of the country.
Nevertheless, there are some other people also who believes that older people are blessing for country. The first and foremost reason is their experience of tough life have made them experts in making right decision. Moreover, they are living examples of history; therefore comedy can connect new generation with culture, traditions and rituals; furthermore, they can teach young generation the reality of life through their real life examples. For instance, the experienced advice of elders can is the process of attaining success for a country.
Summing up what is mentioned above, I draw my conclusion, the advice and value of elders are priceless for a country; though, with increase in their number expenses of the country will also increase.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19105691057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81258808368 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1774396373 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24425900065 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931485882639 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796289301241 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136166107837 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469812643728 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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