In many countries schools have several problems with students behaviour.What do you think are the causes of this.What solutions can you suggest.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, tutees attitude towards tutors is changing continuously. In umpteen nations learning centres have multifarious issues with learners behaviour.This essay will intent to analyse the triggers and some solutions to tackle the above stated view in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the causative factors of this problem and the main reason is that teacher gives corporal punishment to students so they donot like their mentors. Resultantly ,it creates conflicts anong pupils and educator. In addition to this, some educatees feel humiliation in the class because instructors behave rudely with them. Thus, they feel hurt and changing their behaviour towars class teacher that disturb the peaceful environment of the school. For instance, in Newzealand, a survey was conducted in which the rude behaviour of the educators was main reason to create several complications in the alma mater. Moreover,the another reason is inequality in the classroom. If teachers treats some students partially in the class then they cannot make better relationships with the learners.
Turning towards solution of this problem, mentors should treat their offsprings with friendly way. When they will teach them as a friend, they can clear their study doubts and can make strong bonding with them. Consequently, it will reduce the conflicts among the tutors and learners. What is more, instructors should encourage mentees to take part in physical activities. After doing physical tasks in the school, they can release their stress. To cite an example, children should play different games like cricket, football and volleyball.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, changing behaviour of students is major concern in the learning institutions. If teachers will start friendly behaviour with learners and encourage them to play outdoor activities then it will definately overcome this above problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61111111111 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82474187611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9118405652 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176634527152 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524404052966 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033579357617 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101320283115 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203057477935 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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