In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Small proportion of people gets paid a very high amount of salary in some countries around the world. Many people thinks that it is for the betterment of the country, while others have the opinion that the government should limit the salary to a certain point. This essay will discuss why high earning can benefit the country but why the salaries should not exceed a defined level.
High salaries can result in benefitting the country. People who are paid with huge salaries often pays the highest amount of taxes to the government which results beneficial to the country. For instance, in Canada, those people earning more than two hundred thousand dollars yearly have to pay around 40 percent tax to the government which ultimately is in Canada's benefit. Being able to pay high taxes while earning high salaries is in country's interest.
On the other hand, limiting salaries to a certain level can result in against the government's interest. If the salaries are limited then those rare number of people who by their hard work and consistency would lose the belief in the country's government and eventually would end up paying less taxes or maybe leave the country for good. For example, salaries for high position jobs were stopped at a certain level by the China's government which ended up people resigning and opting for starting their own businesses. Salaries not exceeding a defined point can result against the government interest.
In conclusion, few number of people earning significantly high amount of money in some countries. This essay discussed why high salaries is in the interest of the country and why salaries should be stopped at a certain level by the government according to some people. In my opinion, Government should not limit the salaries at any level because the higher the salary one's receive the higher amount of tax he or she will pay to the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
... government interest. In conclusion, few number of people earning significantly high am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95283018868 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51705350051 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6659269816 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453832593117 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185090062178 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698637495282 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323204357349 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897214858516 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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