Some people agree that it is necessary to invest in arts while the others claim that governments should focus on healthcare and education as much as possible. Personally, I believe that education and health should get more priority, but it does not mean that arts should be ignored.
On the one hand, supporters of arts say that arts can improve spiritual life and color the life as well. For example, painting works can improve imaginary ability and multi-dimensional thinking. In addition, music can cure depression. For instance, music can make the patients’ morale become more optimistic and get off the loneliness that they created by themselves. Besides, museums and galleries are the best places to educate people, broaden their horizons and relieve stress. Therefore, governments should not completely neglect the arts and it is absolutely worth the investment.
On the other hand, to help the nation more develop, citizens have to health and literacy. That is the reason why healthcare and education should be the top priorities. Hospitals are indispensable for people's demands because diseases are inevitable, it happens to anyone. Moreover, although they do not have any diseases, they still want to take a physical examination. Arts make contributions to improve mental health but it still depends on the hobbies of individuals and apparent that not everyone loves arts. Besides, education plays a role in enhancing the development of the country. For example, after 1953, the investment in education has brought South Korea a rapidly growing development. Only through two generations, thanks to education, South Korea has become a great power nation.
Overall, I personally feel that governments should invest in healthcare services as well as education system because they are crucial in society. However, I do believe that spending money on the arts is completely workable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36577181208 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94661637873 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.494584714 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140534994548 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430339218778 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569196546757 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100365050025 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435909989691 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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