These days, TV programmes have numerous violence scenes, and some people claim that it has negative effects on the young and governments should ban that kind of scenes on TV. Personally, I partly agree with those views. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, there are a large number of films that extremely need violence scenes to describe the reality of the movie’s story. For example, if war films have no violent scenes, it will become less attractive and boring. Besides that, if violence scenes are reduced or banned on TV programmes, some individuals who love action movies cannot enjoy their TV time. It will restrain the development of the movie industry and the diversity of films.
On the other hand, it can be denied that violence on TV programmes has negative effects not only on the young generation but also on our social development because youngsters often copy actions they saw on TV. For example, if their idols act some action scenes on TV and they may think that it is cool and they want to be the same as their idols. Therefore, they tend to have bad behavior like what they watch on TV and they do not realize that is evil.
To conclude, I feel that violence scenes on TV are necessary but it also needs to reduce. Parents should control what their offspring watch on TV and some TV programmes should limit the age of viewers if they are less than eighteen years old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...iscuss now. On the one hand, there are a large number of films that extremely need violence scen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i feel, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62256809339 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39951344319 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5237270247 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212841301592 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768458339645 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589692933349 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133889223348 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382204301664 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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