In this modern age, the younger generation is taking less interest in reading newspapers and watching news television channel. It is true that mainly news occurs like bombard, terrorist attack, accident news, international affairs, political news, national news and business news. This is the news that today youth people get bored while reading in the newspapers and watching news on TV. This might create miserable development in the future So, on this issue, there are some reasons with this kind of group sample are ingoring to read newspapers and watch the news on the tv set. However, I personally believe with that this consequence can be solved through Innovation, Information technology and Internet for outweigh this drawback.
To begin with, youth is having low encouragement to have a look on mass media sources because to avoid dishearten news such a violent and explosion as we can take a real example of Syria attack and natural disasters like earthquake, tsunami and soil erosion. These sorts of news can make them emotional, mental stress and anxiety. Therefore, this consequence displays dismissive development because young generation is the present and the future of the nation. Furthermore, If they are unaware about the updated news happening around them, then they will not be able to participate and compete in this competitive business world.
Another factor is nowadays young people are fond of using social media sites like google, twitter, Facebook, YouTube and much more through the internet. This site provides international news into bullet points as well as saving more time. Moreover, with the use of the internet, they allow to read and watch any category of news they wants to without any restriction from another. Whereas, it takes a long time while reading, watching and collecting the news information from the mass media sources.
For solution, the mass media house should change their news contents writing style into bullet points and present the individual news convert into highlight short stories, where it will help to make them during reading and watching the news.
To sum up, I strongly trust with that this strategy will definitely help to grab the attention and encourage them to read and watch the news form the mass media sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, kind of, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19676549865 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58725289661 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56064690027 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.567462446 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1940142933 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798248692669 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507176556494 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107656123559 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614381156886 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.