Around the globe, sport is considered as the fourth factor to make country pride and proud. The media broadcasting of the particular sport plays essential role in order to develop the sport industry, showcase new talents players and spread the updated of players or athletics records. However, I personally agree with that the coverage of the outdoor games on tv create a huge impact in the sport sector and uphold young talents. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why coverage of sport plays a fundamental role and what are the beneficial factors.
Initially, the sport updated news support young generation player to have a knowledge of the rules and generation of games. In an additional, it makes them to be in discipline whilst playing on the ground. Moreover, coverage of sport on television creates on youth more motivation, encouragement and makes a highly inspiring to them and concurrently it also makes them focus on their physically and mentally fit.
The Second factor is young players can collect the information about the senior players world record and their playing strategy and statistics. Through the updated from sports channel on small screen. Finally, through media house, young talents can exhibit their performance in the sports platform and in front of worldwide audiences. Furthermore, they will also learn about how to get into interaction and socialization with overseas players and with sports business industries owners.
To sum up, I strongly believe with that the coverage of outdoor games creates inspiration on youth and make sure them to take participate and compete in the sport activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20676691729 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75072133474 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1454986393 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200885890741 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784817498514 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463491449551 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120331659691 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486525351413 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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