Many countries want to host international sports events, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more disadvantages than benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
International sports events are hosted from ancient times. One of them is the Olympic games which were born in ancient Greece about 2500 years ago. In the first time, the Olympic games were competitions between different city-states of Greece, but today it is competitions between almost countries of the world. There are more kinds of sport competitions in today's world. And some people think that hosting international sports events has more disadvantages and can cause a lot of problems to country, while others believe that international sport events have a lot of profits and it is very beneficial generally. Who is right?
People who believe that hosting international sports competitions has more disadvantages than benefits consider that it, first of they, is very costly, It means that it requires a lot of money for different expenses such as build new stadium, advertising and so on. And these money come from citizens taxes. However, not every person is interested in sports events and relative topics, but he or she cannot refuse payouts to it.
What about benefits? There are some different obvious benefits. First of all, it unites countries and help them with relationship. Also it can help to develop various spheres of state such as tourism. The country where sports events are hosted might become loved by foreign fans and they may want to visit this country again not only for sport. And what about expenses it can be partly or even fully paid off on account of tickets sales.
I believe that sports events can be both beneficial and disadvantageous. There are different factors which can influence it, for instance, one of them is the number of fans who will visit it. And I think that sports experts and a lot of other sport related people must weigh the pros and cons before spend money for it and optimise it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...new stadium, advertising and so on. And these money come from citizens taxes. However, not ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ntries and help them with relationship. Also it can help to develop various spheres ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94533762058 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63970492678 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.8460721499 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33425847469 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094674254066 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105282146103 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197228579805 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594982126223 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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