It is undeniable to say that sports play a vital rold in everyone's lives to stay fit and healthy. While a few inhabitants ponder that number of countries should oragnize sports in their own nation. But, rest of the people think that is not a good idea. Therefore, I agree with the former view of point, and I will discuss individual's view points in the following paragraphs.
On the on hand, there are various arguments of people, who believe that they had better host international sports in the own nation. First and foremost is that relationship become stronger between local and international players owing to this trend. In another words, if any country organise sport event in their nation, then local people or players will get a chance to communicate with them therefore, they know about western culture and traditions. Which are extremely important to enhance their information. Secondly, when other nation host any kind of sport events, then infrastruture will increase. Because host country can spend chunks of money to improve the road and buliding conditions of their nation. Which is immensely beneficial for increasing the opportunities. As a result, thanks to this, tourisum will imcrease in these kinds of nations.
On the other hand, there are many view against this statement. First of all, local teenagers face numerous problems because of this. They can be diverted from their moral path because when they see to western people's culture and fashion, they also try to become like them and forget their own culture. Which is extremely harmful for their progress. Moreover, number of fatal diseases can be faced by local citizens because. To cite an example, it has been discovered by OX-FORD UNIVERSITY that number of skin allergies had been spread in one nation because of international sport event and approximatly 3000 people died.
To conclude, it is clear from the above mentioned information that although internation sport event lead some detrimental impacts on people's lives. But, in my opinion, international game's events are extremely beneficial for host country along with local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...veryones lives to stay fit and healthy. While a few inhabitants ponder that number of...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w about western culture and traditions. Which are extremely important to enhance thei...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun view seems to be countable; consider using: 'many views'.
Suggestion: many views
...ations. On the other hand, there are many view against this statement. First of all, l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18023255814 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71769212011 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4230795871 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248448728006 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699128989967 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656445302994 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162208302117 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057604963991 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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