There is a growing tendency among women to feel reluctant about getting married nowadays. Many people think that since women are capable of earning their own bread, they do not need the financial support which marriage provides. I agree with this statement to some extent; however, I also believe that there are additional factors, such as loss of freedom and increased divorce rate accounting for this trend.
One of the main reasons for women not wanting to tie the knot is women earn almost as much money as any male does these days. This is because, the gender gap, which used to prevail in the society earlier, undermining and confining females to stay within the four-walls of the house for doing household chores and raising children, is no longer present. In other words, women are coming out of their cocoons and entering the job market to provide for their families as well as for themselves. For instance, a recent study published in a renowned magazine reported that the last decade has witnessed a 45% increase in women participation in the job sector all over the world. Thus, the financial security, which the women used to seek after getting marriage, is no longer required for them. Consequently, the marriage rate has constantly declined over the past few years.
On the other hand, some women are scared of getting married due to the fear of losing their freedom. The reason behind this, in our conventional society, women are generally not allowed to go outside without any companion after marriage, which restricts their right as a human being. However, before marriage they can do whatever they like, go wherever they want without thinking much about the social norms. Actually, this gives rise to a fear in women’s mind, holding them back from starting a family with a husband. Moreover, the incidence of divorce has surpassed the number of marriage in a few countries. Because of this, women think of marriage as an emotional turmoil, which makes them think instead of going through a broken marriage, it is better not to get married at all.
In conclusion, while women earning money act as a causative factor for their reluctance in marriage, I think that the anxiety for losing independence and soaring divorce rate need to be taken into account as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, however, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92764857881 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50655051916 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560723514212 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.992897154 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207124338655 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071500925564 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573772686668 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138401361043 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084548097284 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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