Nowadays, migration from rural areas to cities is one of the most prominent challenges for lots of governments and majority of young people are reluctant to remain in their villages because of the lack of some fundamental facilities.
Social researchers published documents which illustrate that the rate of immigration from villages to cities has ascended during this decade. According to this information between 2012 and 2016 in African countries the percentage of young people who immigrated from their villages to cities increased more than 10%. Social experts believe that young people because of some noticeable reasons such as unemployment and poverty abandon their villages and go to cities to improve their life style. Some experts think that this immigration has some advantages for young people. They emphasize that young people can improve their education level and increase their skills and consciousness to qualify for jobs and as a result they can achieve more money for living.
On the other hand some other social experts are unanimous in some disadvantages of this type of immigration. They think that in this phenomenon first of all, young inhabitants of villages conflict with many unavoidable issues like finding job and home in cities to live. In addition when they leave their rural farms Destruction of villages is predictable. One of the other disadvantages of this expatriation is increasing cities population and even some townspeople face with some problems such as lack of food source and increasing air pollution.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that number of immigrants from rural areas to cities has increased during these years and it caused to create some problems for people recently. Hence, I think to prevent this phenomenon, governments and organizations should facilitate people`s lifestyle in rural areas by devise some innovative plans. Actually in my opinion motivation plans can persuade people to remain in their native areas and develop their activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, so, as to, even so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41719745223 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88879485345 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9886458107 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144662141579 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634370701443 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384259214006 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101204456826 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02760126328 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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