Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol.
Do you think this is an effective measure against crime?
What other solution can you suggest?
Many people commit crimes because of the stimulus of booze and the most suitable solution to decrease the illegal actions is forbidden alcohol. In my opinion, this measure can create an effective impact against criminals. However, there are a number of actions that could be adopted to tackle this problem.
Banning liquor in citizens' daily lives may bring back some positive result in reducing wrongdoers. People who get drunk always lose control of their behaviours and in some cases, alcohol makes users become addicted. Hence, the over dependence on liquor may make people manipulate their manners leading them to be a crime of passion. Because of that reason, preventing citizens from alcohol can constitute the proportion of offenders due to alcoholic reduction. Moreover, forbidden liquor means that the government can stop illicit alcohol sellers selling to students who are under legal age utilizing alcohol.
In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these prospective issues. One solution to this problem is for the authorities not only to introduce more strict laws to control the circulation of alcohol in their country, but also level up the punishment as a threat to those who have illegal inclination. Another viable solution to this problem would be for parents who are initial teachers to raise the awareness of negative consequences of liquor by educating at home. Moreover, local administration should establish rehabilitation on support centres to help people escape from addiction.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding criminals, yet, they can be solved once according solutions are enlisted imperatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, moreover, regarding, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47307692308 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8298780997 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4283110972 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244526565642 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807339221238 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504887516093 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136372862272 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779423326187 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.