Many criminal commit further as soon as released from prison.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What possible solutions you can suggest?
It is irrefutable that crime is one of the serious issue which has gained depressing magnitude over a many decades. Even though, offenders are being penalised once for their crime, they are attempting it again. This essay describes reasons behind, and remedies of the topic in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the main cause of this problem is unemployment. For instance, although culprits have finished their punishment, the employers do not hire them as worker at any place because of their criminal status and these circumstances force them to continue their offensive action again. Another reason responsible for this is having support of gangs due to which, they do not frighten to take any illegal step even after punished by the court once.
On the other hand,several steps can be taken by governing authorities to abstain them from repeating crime again. It, such as, can offer certificate of trust for the contentment of employer and would be beneficial for prisoner after their bailing to get the job. Government should launch special task force to grasp those head of gangs under whom these law-breaker are working again and again after being sentenced. What is more, they should be introduced to unpaid community services to see betterment in them.
Suffice to say, government should take a shot against these repeat offenders which is only possible if this issue solved with right perception and perspectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, such as, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43497757848 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03461234538 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681614349776 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7377609799 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.181818182 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10512222589 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400768386078 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231990315131 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572562689381 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155171089418 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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