Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison.
What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Malefaction has been considered as one of the most worrying issues among nations. However, the ways of treating ex-prisoners after having been restricted from liberty has attracted significant attention from the society. Consequently, many people claim that they will pursue further illegal acts once having been released from jail. As far as I am concerned, although there are several reasons leading to this adverse situation, solutions implemented to mitigate this trend undeniably exist.
There are numerous causes which make recommitting crimes among ex-prisoners anticipated. First and foremost, they have been suffering from financial burden because of the deprivation of knowledge and negative attitudes of companies' administrators towards them. As a result, unemployment is inevitable. In addition to this, social discrimination should be taken into consideration sicne losing faith and reliance in ex-criminals are arising among every single person. Consequently, isolation has been recorded worldwide.
Although undesirable situations are predictable, measures are being taken by the governments to gradually alleviate the contradictory aspects. To begin, ex-prisoners should be provided with adequate fundamental practical skills to be released from the cumbersome condition of financial shortage. This can be accomplished by establishing subsidised vocational classes to equip them with a certain level of techniques and knowledge. Moreover, social awareness and belief in criminals who are no longer restricted from freedom should be raised. To achieve this, charitable activities should be publicised more frequently alongside promoting ex-prisoners to participate in those meaningful measures. In other words, they will have a chance to reveal their importance and proliferate the respect of the society.
To put things in a nutshell, financially burdensome circumstances and social isolation are the two preponderant reasons forcing ex-prisoners to execute malefaction acts; however, solutions are being implemented by national authorities to conciliate these controversial portions, namely opening vocational course and voluntary activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21262458472 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28577643052 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644518272425 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7033796934 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162019088854 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494746672234 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386890625709 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939503157921 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395853377678 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.74 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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