Most offenders in the world today tend to commit crime again after break away from prison. There are many causes of this situation but steps can definitely be taken to tackle this problem. This essay will examine these causes and possible solutions before drawing a reasonable conclusion.
Admittedly, there are two main causes lead to problem of re-commit crime. Firstly, penalties are not enough strong for prisoners so criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. One good illustration of this, today in Turkey, prisons have quite comfortable conditions such as accessible warm water, air conditioner or delicious foods. Secondly, killers and thefts commit again crime after go out from prison due to lack of advanced rehabilitation. For instance, it can be seen that range of crime decreased the lowest proportions in the USA after psychologic rehabilitation centers allocate in prisons. Thus, the government should be prudent about the proportion of crime and range of repeat of crimes.
On the other hand, there are a variety of possible solutions for decreasing re-commit crime such as to improve education, make stronger punishments or skilled staff in prisons. Although available teachers and psychologists in prisons they are not enough to solve this problem. Therefore, the government should allocate more skilled person for prisons and prisoners. For example, according to a report published by the New York Times, prisons which are allocated rehabilitation centers in order to reduce crime rates are more effective than others concerning the to prevent crime. Furthermore, prisons conditions ought to have either negative conditions or educational. Even though these solutions sometimes be perilous on prisoners’ psychology they are necessary in order to decrease crime range which is commited by old prisoners.
To sum up, after decades of speculation, today majority of justice ministries have fairly accurate information concerning the criminals and their further crimes. Many offenders today have tendency of commit crime released from prison. However, there are many possible solutions to tackle these problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57099697885 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89309906146 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0372083497 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343885797864 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114976695597 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742546446265 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22310319941 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285588401059 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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