Many developed countries now have large numbers of people over the age of 65. What problems might this cause?
How can the problems be solved?
majority of developed countries the large portion of their populations is over age of 65 this situation is causing the countries some economic problems.
In many developed countries the population is getting older and the rate of birth is becoming lower every year .As a result this could become problematic for economy and the society .For example the problem are the number of people in the work force is becoming less, also there are so many retired that the country needs to provide them with monthly salary and health benefit. As a result this could put a lot of financial pressure on economy.
The another big issue with ageing population is the health problem. As the people become older their health will decline therefore, they need so much medical attention all of this could put additional pressure in the economy of the country.
However, There are some solutions to some of this problems . For example in china so many parents live with their children. Children can take care of their parents and it would cost less economically to live separately consequently grandparents can take care of their grandchildren therefore, The parents do not need to spend so much money on day care and also they are more relaxed because they know their children are not at the hands of strangers.
in conclusion if the younger generation and older generation work together and take care of each other not only is best for your concise also its good for the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.892 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55054147609 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.54570563 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.888888889 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209252961715 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950434398459 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855934390863 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125160595319 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095857460242 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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