Rapid growth of industrialization and construction are the major concerns for many developing countries. Many problems are evolving from industries and construction. In my opinion using modern techniques and implementing strict pollution control laws enriches the quality of water and air. Pollution from industries and construction sector can be restricted by implementing appropriate actions.
Now-a-days, Air and water pollution are the burning issues. Factories and construction field causes the poising of air and water bodies enormously. Industries burning the chemical waste causes releasing of harmful gases directly to the environment which leads to the contaminating the air. Factories built across the river banks passes their liquid waste through outlets to the adjoint water bodies. Which results in dirtying the water. Moreover, Construction department also evolves dust particles during the establishing or demolishing a structure. Heavy vehicles are required for demolishing a structure, which emits harmful carbon gases after burning the fuels. In addition, demolished debris are dumped into surrounding rivers and pounds that results in water contaminating mankind and government bodies can tackle these problems by bringing certain actions into play.
Air and water pollution can be reduced by implementing few processes like recycling the waste from manufacturing units and treating the waste water before dispatching into pounds and lakes. Garbage from the production sectors should be spilled for from the cities and the harmful waste should be separated and buried with cement concrete government should pass strict rules and laws on the sectors which causes immense pollution. The demolished debris from the construction site should be recycled by powdering it and used in other massive construction.
In conclusion, implementing these actions results in better environment, quality air and water. Causes of air pollution by construction and industries can be restricted solved in different ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86101694915 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04514721717 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9633832863 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260735394939 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966616924029 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709903909648 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181584450605 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723254185503 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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