Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the world is witnessing the dramatic development of many countries, especially in economic field. It is said that the most essential purpose of a nation is the developed economic progress. Others believe that progresses of other fields play equal roles as economy. In my opinion, I agree with the latter statement.
On the one hand, flourish economy can bring about many benefits. Strong economy can provide a country ability to improve facilities, infrastructure and so on which can lead to the situation that living standard of citizens can be improved. For example, in developed economy, there will be a great deal of employment as well as the refurbishment of the hospitals and transport system. Moreover, the strength of economic conditions can emphasize the position of a country in international scale which can bring about many opportunities for more flourish economy and stable national security. Therefore, economic development is one of the most essential parts of a country.
On the other hand, there are other fields that play balanced role as economy which support the development of economy in the best conditions. First and foremost, balancing the society is another part that countries should take into consideration. Narrowing the gap between the poor and the rich, guarantee the internal security of a nation and preventing the bad news released by reactionary organizations from citizens and so on are the necessary measures need the attraction of governments which can surely be solved radically by a great deal of money. Another point, investing in education is the key process of a nation for long-term improvement. This process can guarantee the ability of future leaders and individuals to manage and contribute for the nation in the next years.
In conclusion, although economic development brings about many positive aspects, other process like society and education should be taken into accounts for sustainable evolution of a country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36217948718 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99977912566 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9982563869 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128885606809 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537042128764 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489802479115 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097265937932 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583268412903 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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