Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is argued between citizens what the best approach for governors to reach satisfying condition is. While some claim that economic improvement should be the most significant function for societies, others believe a perfect country requires allocating the same emphasis to all kinds of progress. Mentioned opinions will be clarified later in this essay as well as the writer’ belief.
On the one hand of this issue, devoting all the importance to only economic situation has had several reasons. Firstly, developing financial portion of countries has had beneficial impacts on variety of amenities which resulting in people’s satisfaction. Because good circumstance in finance has led authorities to increase their facilities which have been essential for developed countries such as medical or entertainment part. As a result, contentment of societies by their residents would be heighten. Moreover, when a country is in a good economic condition, would have a perfect international position which would gain more prosperous achievements for them, simultaneously.
On the other hand, individuals who have thought of other aspects of societies to be as considerable as economic one, have regarded their own explanations. In their opinion, satisfying economic level would not make people to be pleased, unless other parts of societies have been improved such as fair regulations, freedom. For example, Russia has been in good finance circumstance, but its citizens has not had enough freedom to speak or unbiased rules which would be fair to all types of people. This has propelled Russian not to be satisfied with their governor even though they have had worthy financial level.
In conclusion, although one significant part of societies has been the economic situation, other aspects should not be overlooked. Based on writer’s view, parts such as impartial rules or liberty have been other factors which are essential to be in good position, otherwise individuals would not feel content.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5064516129 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0134298773 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.845829177 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170854151474 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622513655273 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403829565679 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106686006388 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314208067599 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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