Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, a wide range of information in academic portion has been produced. Some individuals argue that all the datum must be shared with people, while others believe several information has to maintain confidential because of the their importance. Those two mentioned opinions will be explained later as well as the writer’s opinion which is in agreement with the first group.
One the one side, although a great amount of information has been generated each day, it has been necessary to share for some reasons. First one is that a high proportion of people are now educated which has propelled them to comprehend variety of various scientific facts. Therefore, by becoming individuals aware of all the information not only to distinguish up-coming problems based on investigating issues, but also to prepare them how to react to those difficulties if they occurred. For instance, if scientist had said about the corona virus immediately after they found the evidence, the whole world would not have been under these horrible circumstance. Consequently, exchanging knowledge could be extremely beneficial for both authorities and citizens in order to be ready for every possible change which may be happened in the future.
On the other hand, among obtained information, there may be some significant or worthy ones which is better not to share with the whole world. Because, some of them has been formed by expert who have been working day and night or in other words, have spent all their lives in them. So, it would be unjustified to tell them to others freely. Moreover, some of them could be absolutely significant which may not be a good idea to share them with all the people who could abuse them to make a profit. This has happened many times when some governments’ issues has been abused by some people to scare their residents as well as declining their power in the world.
In conclusion, it is argued among people whether to say all the datum to people or not. I myself believe telling all of them is essential in today’s world that technology has made it diverse to be a small planet where everyone could be able to identify variety of knowledge.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...hared with people, while others believe several information has to maintain confidential because of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...has to maintain confidential because of the their importance. Those two mentioned opinion...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tioned opinions will be explained later as well as the writer’s opinion which is i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75405698337 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7225845065 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249576754818 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880002235311 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553484634731 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155709442734 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409814794325 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...hared with people, while others believe several information has to maintain confidential because of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...has to maintain confidential because of the their importance. Those two mentioned opinion...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tioned opinions will be explained later as well as the writer’s opinion which is i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75405698337 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7225845065 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249576754818 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880002235311 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553484634731 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155709442734 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409814794325 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.