Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Over the past few decades, there has been considerable debate about the way we should follow to improve a country's situation. For many governments, a thriving economy is undoubtedly the most crucial goal which needs to be pursued at all costs. However, many people suggest that we should also take other aspects into consideration, as all of them share equal importance in the development of a nation. This essay will look into both sides of the argument, and point out why I side with the latter view.
To begin with, economic progress is apparently one of the most decisive factors contributing to the overall status of a country. Since many other fields require money as their fundament, a country will gain various benefits if its economy reaches a certain level of development. In simpler terms, it acts as a stepping stone to further improvements that governments aim to achieve, such as upgrading the infrastructure or importing necessary technologies. What is more, economic progress also means that the standards of living in that country are likely to raise, ensuring a better life quality for its citizens.
Turning to the other side of the argument, it is reasonable to say that there are also many other types of progress that lead to the development of a country. First of all, education, for example, plays an irreplaceable role since it will exert an enormous impact on other fields since an educated workforce has a tendency to greatly boost the rate of growth in the corresponding sector in which they work. A good illustration is that doctors who are properly educated with all the necessary knowledge and have the mastery of applying them will definitely improve the efficiency of hospitals and other medical facilities. Furthermore, if a country's policy is too focused on a certain sector, then the balance between different areas will be broken, resulting in some unexpected drawbacks.
In conclusion, despite some benefits of concentrating on economic progress, I hold the belief that equally developing all other aspects will be a better approach. If a country carefully judges its situation and puts equal efforts into every sector, it will definitely thrive and achieve more accomplishments in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12295081967 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94114610489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4283613439 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246237703397 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801761758654 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459645453152 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145923239687 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368561024592 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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