Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this modern society, morality has always been one of the most important characteristics when it comes to judging one's personality. Therefore, many people believe that since the early ages, children should be taught to behave well by their parents; while others hold the belief that school would be a more suitable place to teach them of well-being. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and then present my own viewpoint.
To begin with, parents should be responsible for teaching their children to be good members of the society. First and foremost, they are the ones who accompany with their kids throughout their growing up process. As a consequence, children are significantly affected by the actions and viewpoints of their parents, which act as a model for them to follow in the early stages of life. Moreover, education at educational facilities is somehow restricted by certain rules and regulations, while parents would be more realistic "teachers" as they can provide real-world perspectives.
However, school also has a certain role to play in the education of a child to become a balanced member of the society. There is no doubt that school, or a class, has always been a lively example of a small-sized community, and this helps children realise how they should communicate and interact with other people around. Additionally, with the guidance and supervision of teachers or instructors, initial seeds of the expectations of the society could be easily implanted in the child's mind, helping them understand what certain behaviours are acceptable. This would considerably affect children's way of thinking and act as a strong foundation to properly shape their thoughts.
Overall, while schools and parents both share certain responsibility in educating children to become good civilians, I believe that school would be a more suitable environment on the grounds that they share a lot of common features with the real society. Teachers and peers would play a huge role in forming the basic requirements in kids' mind and helping them achieve essential qualities such as sympathy or mutual appreciation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26822157434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03302575203 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3430341276 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267620248101 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919357127173 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780736788855 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162162345229 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425243098528 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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