Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, people hold various views as to whether or not economic development should be the primary target of a nation. Whereas there are compelling arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that other measures of progress are just as essential.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why national prosperity is considered as a fundamental goal in many countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in better job prospects for everyone, meaning that employees could secure a job with a good salary. Secondly, economic growth ensures that more money will be allocated in other fields. For instance, the government can use taxes to invest in environmental preservation and medical treatment, which leads to improved quality of life and sustainable development in society. Finally, a strong economy allows that nation to assert its position on the global stage. A salient example is the competition between the USA and China in terms of GDP to be the world's most powerful economy.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that various other forms of progress are just as significant as economic factors. To embark on, educational advancement has a crucial role to play in training cultured citizens who will considerably contribute to a country’s well-being. Furthermore, if social unrests are yet to be mitigated, the entire country will not be able to fully focus on boosting the whole economic system. For example, Israel and Palestine are having wars against each other, which prevents these nations from functioning properly.
By way of conclusion, although there are sensible reasons to claim that economic growth is a principal goal, I reaffirm my state that educational and social factors are not to be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...ay’s society, people hold various views as to whether or not economic development should be the prim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20422535211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89759423843 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7203932536 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157563674787 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499292605524 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306018389546 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892356222273 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313867531758 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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