WRITING TASK 2 :
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:
These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.
Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city ) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
Write at least 250 words.
Over the last 50 years, there has been an increase in the number of people who relocate to urban areas in search of work and entertainment. Nonetheless, in the following essay, I will elucidate the adverse impacts of this phenomenon, followed by some feasible solutions.
First and foremost, one of the major issues associated with rural depopulation would be the city’s growing demands for fossil fuels and natural resources. Accordingly, cities throughout the world these days are increasingly vulnerable to such environmental catastrophes as air, water, and soil pollution. Ho Chi Minh City is a particularly good example of this. Another worrying problem is that the uncontrolled growth of urban population could give rise to a variety of social issues such as increased employment and crime rates, especially in less affluent regions. As a consequence, it is the government that has to squander a significant amount of money on tackling these troubles.
One solution to stem the tide of rural depopulation is for local authorities to devote more resources to making rural life more appealing to citizens. To embark on, high-quality fitness facilities, entertainment centers, up-to-date healthcare services should always be readily available to meet people's demands. In other words, if the disparity between rural and urban living conditions were well addressed, more and more people would opt to live in the countryside. Another viable solution to this issue would be for the government to guarantee sufficient incomes for farmers so that they can concentrate on farming without worrying about financial hardship, which forces many individuals to relocate to a new living place.
By way of conclusion, I would contend that rural depopulation will result in environmental and social issues in the city and that we can resolve this trend by improved conditions in rural regions as well as sustainable earnings for farmers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, nonetheless, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37293729373 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08151869969 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7275850544 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226051215324 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073809574223 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317689968796 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129247484489 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132542337085 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.