Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Progress of a nation has become a hot topic for debate in today’s society. Government believe that economic progress is the most important progress. Whereas people believe that there are other types of progress which are equally momentous for a country. This essay will cast light on both sides and will provide reasons for the same.
Governments are responsible for the welfare of the people. In their opinion, economic progress is of vital importance and they strive for the same. By uplifting the economic status, government try to improve the living standards and financial status of the people. As money is important for one’s survival, government are determined to work on economic progress. By doing so, they aim to eradicate poverty and provide basic amenities like food, shelter, potable water, etc. to each and every individual of the society. This explains the reason why government prioritize economic progress above any other type of progress.
On the other hand, some people believe that government should focus on other domains and not only on economy progress. Other progresses involve education, children welfare, health, etc. In most of the cases, government officials are corrupt and their goal for economic progress is for own interest. Also, other progresses are equally imperative for overall development of society. For instance, if a country is economically sound but the children of this country are malnourished due to corrupt officials, this country cannot be considered developed as it is lacking in health department. So, people believe that for overall development of a country all types of progress should be considered.
To sum it up, every domain is equally important for development of country. I am in complete agreement with the latter point of view. This essay argued that all types of progress are equally important and prioritizing single domain can have detrimental effects on the development of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...r debate in today’s society. Government believe that economic progress is the most impo...
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Line 5, column 655, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'type'?
Suggestion: type
...or overall development of a country all types of progress should be considered. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31511254019 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77987247684 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495176848875 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4465361866 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.65 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440742497172 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149720293943 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10254251791 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276128053455 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618466126457 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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