Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goals. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Economic progess is considered as the most significant target by a lot of government in the world. While, several societies asess that the other progresses are also important equally. This issue actually has been talked over by mnny experts, but in this essay I will deliver my point of views about economic progress and three kinds of progress which are also crucial for one nation.
On the one hand, the country administrations have a big concern to economoc progress, probably, because it has correlation closely to basic need of people. In the economic performance measurements, GDP plays the most considerable role to determine how better the economic welfare in the country. When we can see depthly in this issue, the GDP is the representative of individual well-being in the country, thus, the economic progress cannot be ignored as the main aspect to be monitored.
Turning to other side, the economic progress cannot be stood alone. There are three other aspects should be recognised by the government and society. First of all is political progress where the any kind of public policy and regulation are generated. By the steady political climate can support the countries' progress as a whole. For instance, the good bureaucracy of export-import can be useful for the local producer to increase their economic state. Secondly, it is the environmental progress which has a close relationship with the healty aspect of human life. We can see that, the pollution saw a dramatic increase in any area, not only in the big cities but also the suburb areas. By this reason, the improvement om environmental aspect should be healed seriously. The another aspect is the technological progress which cannot be separated as the bond of country's progress. The technological advancement has taken a big investment portion in many countries. It seem that the global trend will lead to the real digital era. In fact, the economic condition in many country are backed up by the advancement of technology.
In my opinion, admittedly, the economic progress has driven the positive impact to one country, but in the reality, the integration of other aspects such as politics, environment and technology are also needed to bring the better nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12261580381 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93342695943 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528610354223 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8253666131 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9473684211 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24975036218 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077352034153 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478177065855 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158624275256 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357946837146 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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