Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is often argued that the growth of economic is the most crucial target. I completely disagree with this statement, and I strongly believe that the environment developing and the mentality of liver should not be ignored.
There are several reasons why I believe that a country should be just focused on the aims of economic growth. china has a growing rapidly at economic since the budgets of government investment are all put into commercial and industrial development, such as manufacturer or power plant. While it is undeniable that the growth of the economy has raised dramatically, they overlook the paid of residents. There is several news published frequently that someone who live in china was died by air pollution, which reveals that environment saving is also vital for living. As environment is critical for keeping inhabitants’ health to hold productivity in the long-term, government should balance the aims between economic and environment.
On the other hand, the mentality of residents is also important. A positive mental can improve the effectiveness of work, and continue to keep the working result. An
international example to support this fact may be finland. All we know that finland is the most happiness country as well as keep a not-bad result of GDP. The reason is that the mentality of finland's liver is strong by the policy of working hour, they may enjoy releasing the pressure via a suitable working hour, and then they can restart their turbo to full pay in their job. that is a good way to balance the mentality of citizens, and it will affect the result of economic finally.
To sum up, the leader of the country should not ignore the importance of environment keeping and mentality of inhabitants, since these are the factor to motivate economic growing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, may, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04013377926 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89850613121 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4585210946 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916742774551 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031330242784 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277687866367 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513634547001 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249806098359 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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