Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parent should strictly limit the time that children spend in this way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People hold the view that prolonged use of television and computer have a detrimental impacts on the young generation. As such, parents are advised to impose certain restrictions on their children‘s time spent on watching television and using computer. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion.
To start with, numerous health issues among children are attributable to the excessive exposure to television and computer. Firstly, extended use of television and computer in succession may lead to a sedentary lifestyle and social alienation. This is owing to the fact that youngsters are transported to the virtual world, hence tend to less participate in social activities and ignore physical relationships in the real world. Secondly, it is prevailing that eyestrain is commonplace among those who are addicted to high-tech devices. Some even skip their meals in order to watch a favorite TV program or play an appealing video games, which allows no time for eye relaxation.
In virtue of the aforementioned repercussions, it stands to reason that parents should set a limit on the amount of time on which their children are allowed to use television and computer. Youngsters, with the supervision and guidance of their parents, would be able to explore and take part in activities such as sports, which is beneficial to their physical health. Furthermore, by reducing the time spent on television and computer, children are able allocate additional time focusing on academic studies and expanding social circles. This, in return, equips the young with skills that is necessary for the future and broaden their horizons.
In conclusion, excessive use of high-tech devices such as television and computer brings about negative impacts to children. As such, limiting the time use can be seen as vital actions by the parents to cultivate their children’s well-rounded development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'game'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41275167785 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08880359133 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2698778806 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252518478987 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887697253342 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609505629279 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168016931155 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420136419736 0.056905535591 74% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.