Many museum charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantage ?
Museum are the great place for people to know about the history and culture of specific place.Many people think that, museum should have some amount of entry fees for betterment of museum and for economy of government. In my opinion,It is beneficial to charge some amount of money for maintenance and economic growth of government.
Applying amount of fees for visiting can help the museum in developing infrastructure.To maintain and enhance surrounding museum authority can deploy number of workers.As a result they can replace old construction, furniture and piece of sculpture to preserve its presence making use of that money.therefore there are more chances of local and international visitors to visit the museum.For example,the Salar Jung museum in Hyderabad, India employed lot of worker for its maintainance so it has become best museum in India.
In addition, government can benefit more from the museum income.It can develop the city,people from different area will be aware of the famous museum because many tourist will visit so that, it will benefit to government and city it will become popular tourist attraction. As many visitors will visit to the museum such and international crowd then museum can incur money and our economy will be balanced.
In conclusion,it is extremely important for museum authority to allocate some amount as it help to maintain and preserve culture and it can be crucial in growth of economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96487814705 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.527273688 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.0 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272522099367 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151399247098 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765492079308 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176434768937 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854495684865 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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