Topic - Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages.
In this era, people have been forgetting about the past: culture, tradition, lifestyle and things, owing to that, many museums built for remaining our previous custome. museums take entry fees of enrollment ,while others are free of change.I I think the merits of taking fees for admission to museums more than the demerits.
To embark with, museum is only one major source to remaining our previous culture. Some museums run by NGO and other run by the government more than museums take charge for admission fees, owing to that, it is profitable -entry fees help full to improve and rice income of authors or government apart from that, entry fees through management changes look of museums and due to, that people attract to know about antic piece of past. In addition nominal fees for enrollment is helpful to maintain the maintenance and defend our previous antique pieces. For an example, in Rajasthan, one well known and gigantic Museum built by the government. It is very fascinating and people are attract near the museums. Many people visit there, Not only locals are enjoying the museums' beauty but also foreiner come to visit, due to that, it is inclines our income for nation.
On the other hand, museums are giving free entry which are run by both. They want people know about past ,but museums give free enrollment nevertheless they are not visiting .in addition museums expense like security ,electricity, construction all are expenses given by government or owner in their account ,owing to that, decline income and losing economey of nation. But fruitful for student .they can free larn the previous culture.For an example, in american'a government give free entry in any museums for all genration.
To conclude, government should take normal fees for visiting museums for people who can affordable the charging fees more over they have to give free entry for student in museums for learn about economy and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, apart from, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05919003115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45137888759 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507788161994 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4482868302 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378648645989 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154156920728 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842930939953 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2743011857 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372786553782 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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