Forest produce fresh oxygen and participle in regulating climate but every year tree cover of our plant is lessing due to deforestation What are The primary causes of deforestation What result it may lead

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Forest produce fresh oxygen and participle in regulating climate but every year tree cover of our plant is lessing due to deforestation?

What are The primary causes of deforestation .

What result it may lead ?

In this era, proportion of oxygen is decreasing because utilization of automobiles and cutting down greenery. Woodland generate fresh oxygen and participate in controlling weather, however, every year flora cover of our earth is declining owing to erosion. There are some causes of deforestation and some result it may lead it.

On one hand, plantation have been playing a pivotal role into human's life , nowadays all areas are being evolved by means of technology , on account of that, it required to much space. If, people are cutting the trees for their benefits. Moreover, there are some causes of denuding : atmosphere - it is effecting upon weather owing to less oxygen's percentage ; also it helps to increase carbon dioxide, which is harmful for human beings and ozone layer - having less trees , it breaks layer of ozone and thus, people face some diseases like eyes problem, cancer and cholera. The epitome this is Australia, where flora has been being cut by local as well as administration to incline economy of nation and building New companies for evolution due to that , majority of people are suffering from respiratory diseases and scenes problem vis - a' -vis to other nations.

On the other hand, population has booming exponentially because of that , people need much space for living . There are some preventive steps to mitigate issue of deforestation . First and for most authorities ought to make streak lows for those who are removing greenery, also they ought to spread awareness about drawbacks of erosion and locals are used to with fiber and glass to decorate their dwelling rather than using wood. For an example , Canada where , not only students are using laptops and phone in their curriculum but also shopkeepers are used with advanced technology for making bills compared to book and pages thus, there people cut less flora to solve this issue.

To conclude, removing woodland zones , it creates global problems for humans and people have high rate of respiratory diseases , but planting much tree and less utilities wood items in decorating houses .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20178041543 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64563217278 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620178041543 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8999473129 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.083333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 106.0 5.01903807615 2112% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134467134402 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591070495416 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067495512234 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994131045521 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875680321763 0.056905535591 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.